Writing for an Academic Discussion Questions in TOEFL Writing
Learn about Writing for an academic discussion questions in TOEFL writing with an overview, recommended approach and practice question.
by Tim Martyn
Overview
Writing for an academic discussion questions test your ability to write a post in response to a question asked by a professor.
Here are some key points about Writing for an academic discussion questions:
- You’ll be shown a discussion board.
- There will be a question from a professor as well as posts from two other students.
- The professor’s question could be about any topic, but it will always be one that provokes discussion.
- You might be asked to take a position (say whether you agree or disagree with an idea, choose between two alternatives, etc.) or to come up with your own idea (e.g. the most important invention).
- You don’t need any specialist knowledge about the topic.
- You’ll be asked to express your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples.
- You’ll only have 10 minutes to write your post.
- You should write at least 100 words.
Example question
Here’s an example Writing for an academic discussion question.
Instructions: Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response you should:
- express and support your personal opinion
- make a contribution to the discussion
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Professor Abadi
There is some disagreement about whether students should be required to learn a foreign language at school. Some people argue that learning a foreign language should be compulsory because it develops cultural understanding and improves career opportunities. Others argue that with technological advances, most notably artificial intelligence, there is less need for foreign language skills. What is your view? Do you think students should be required to learn a foreign language?
Jake
I think it should be a requirement. It’s true that technology can handle translations pretty well these days, but it’s very hard to communicate properly with speakers of other languages through an app or some other piece of technology. If learning a foreign language isn’t required, we’ll miss out on the opportunity to build genuine connections with people from different cultures.
Sarah
There’s no doubt foreign language skills are valuable, but I don’t think students should be forced to study a language at school. With artificial intelligence and other translation tools, language barriers are less of an issue than they used to be. I think it would be better to make other subjects like STEM or digital literacy compulsory. That would better prepare students for the future.
Recommended approach
Here’s my recommended approach for answering Writing for an academic discussion questions. We’ll use the example question to go through the steps you need to take.
Note: There are many ways to respond to a Writing for an academic discussion question. What I suggest here is an effective approach that is easy to remember and can be applied to any question you might get on test day.
Step 1 > Read the professor’s question
The first step is to quickly read the professor’s question. Because time is so limited, you’ll need to skim most of the question. The main parts to pay attention to are the subject area (in the instructions at the top) and the professor’s direct question (at the bottom).
Here’s the professor’s question again. You’ll see that the important parts have been highlighted.
Instructions: Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response you should:
- express and support your personal opinion
- make a contribution to the discussion
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Professor Abadi
There is some disagreement about whether students should be required to learn a foreign language at school. Some people argue that learning a foreign language should be compulsory because it develops cultural understanding and improves career opportunities. Others argue that with technological advances, most notably artificial intelligence, there is less need for foreign language skills. What is your view? Do you think students should be required to learn a foreign language?
Apart from the subject area, the instructions for Writing for an academic discussion questions are always the same, so there’s no need to read them. The professor’s post will be different each time, but you can skim all of it except for the direct question at the end – that’s the part you need to make sure you understand.
Step 2 > Skim the other students’ posts
There’s no requirement to respond to the other students’ opinions, but you should still skim them. You’re asked to make a contribution to the discussion, so you need to make sure you’re not just repeating the other students’ ideas.
If it makes sense, you can briefly respond to what one of the other students wrote at the start of your post by using phrases such as While I understand Jake’s point of view, I think … or I would like to add to Sarah’s point.
Step 3 > Make a quick plan
Time is very limited, so you don’t have time to make a proper plan. But it’s still useful to write down your opinion and any reasons and examples that come to mind. Only spend about 30 seconds on this.
There’s no rule about how many reasons or examples you need to include in your response. For some questions, you may only be able to think of one main reason for your opinion, which is completely fine.
The plan for this question might look something like this.
Opinion | Agree |
Reasons + examples | 1. trans. tools don’t understand cultural context + body language 2. foreign lang. still valuable at work, e.g. int. business |
Step 4 > Write an introductory sentence
In the first sentence, clearly state your opinion. Optionally, you can respond to what one of the other students wrote. You could also add this later if you have time and/or need to write more words.
Your introductory sentence might look something like this.
While I understand Sarah’s perspective, I tend to agree with Jake’s view that learning a foreign language at school should be compulsory for two main reasons.
Step 5 > Support your opinion
The next step is to add some support for your opinion by giving reasons and/or examples. You should use some cohesive devices (e.g. Firstly, In addition, However, For example, This, etc.) to help you organise your ideas.
Here’s some possible support for our example. Notice the cohesive devices, which have been highlighted.
While I understand Sarah’s perspective, I tend to agree with Jake’s view that learning a foreign language at school should be compulsory for two main reasons.
Firstly, while translation tools can facilitate basic communication, real conversations require an understanding of cultural context and body language, which is precisely where translation tools fall short. Secondly, it is naive to think that foreign language skills will not be of value in students’ future careers. For example, if the use of translation tools becomes the norm in international business, employees with foreign language skills will become even more valuable to their employer. This is because they will be able to build rapport with foreign clients and suppliers more easily than those who rely on translation tools.
Step 6 > Check your work
The final step is to check your work. At this stage, you won’t have time to make any major changes, but it’s still an important step.
Things to check for:
- whether you’ve used an adequate range of grammar and vocabulary;
- whether you’ve used cohesive devices to organise your response;
- spelling;
- your word count.
Scoring rubric
You’ll be given a score from 0 to 5. Here are the main criteria your writing will be scored on.
Criterion | What does this mean? |
---|---|
Relevance | Does your response answer the professor’s question and contribute to the discussion? |
Development | Are your explanations, examples and/or details well developed? |
Grammatical range | Have you used an adequate range of grammatical structures? |
Lexical range | Have you used an adequate range of vocabulary? |
Accuracy | How many grammatical and/or vocabulary errors have you made? |
You can find out more about how Writing for an academic discussion questions are scored here.
Practice question
Now it’s your turn to practise. Try the Writing for an academic discussion question below using the approach outlined above.
Instructions: Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response you should:
- express and support your personal opinion
- make a contribution to the discussion
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Professor Johnson
This week, we’re going to talk about what makes a great teacher. I’m sure all of us can recall a teacher from school who made a positive impression on us, as well as other teachers whose lessons we didn’t enjoy going to. It’s fascinating to consider why this is. What do you think? In your opinion, what is the most important quality for a teacher to have?
Charlotte
I believe a teacher’s ability to connect with students is the most important quality. It’s not just about the information being taught. It’s also about how students feel in the classroom. When a teacher creates a positive and supportive environment, students are more likely to engage with the material and feel motivated to learn.
Daniel
While I agree with Charlotte that a good relationship with students is important, I think the most essential quality for a teacher is their knowledge of the subject. Teachers need to be experts in the content they’re teaching so that they can answer questions, explain concepts thoroughly and provide accurate information. Without this foundation, students can’t fully benefit from the lessons.
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